| 2004-04-26 16:39:48 |
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Well done!! A beautiful subject, wonderfully written. Those who get the chance MUST try it!! |
| 2004-05-20 19:36:47 |
My first encounter_(1)
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good story good story |
| 2004-05-23 22:33:29 |
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great job, try some paragraph breaks tho |
| 2004-06-11 10:23:39 |
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I enjoyed the story but the writer made some retarded mistakes like "in know time flat"...But I think it was worth the 5-10 minutes it takes to read. you needed to put some paragraph formating in it though. Doggiesusan is a moron to say it was very real. I enjoyed it but...at the same time it was kinda lame...Hate to be the first to say it was bad, cuz it wasn't. Just a few grammatical errors I would like to point out. Other then that it was nicely written. Kudos and encore please :-) |
| 2004-07-05 20:31:35 |
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good good |