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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-13 09:21:17 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | i just read it for the third time, i have noticed som mistakes but its great nevertheless, dad shoulda lived though, but the death made it that much better, you cant help feel sorry for the fictional ppl. maybe you should try cutting the kiddy sex and stick with adults so it can get published in a magazine or book. plus i agree with everyone, keep this going, maybe in free time add in between chapter to where like the bear shows up and dies or other interesting stuff, you jump years quickly. maybe itll also get a miniseries shot on a porn tv channel or just str8 to dvd. i would buy it in a heart beat and so would alot of ppl. for all these movie and publishing ppl who come here, consider all of this, its worth big bucks. ps. more chapters and stuff could just get its own book |
| 2007-04-17 14:18:59 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Damn. This is just a display of excellent talent! If you cut out the sex, and expand it (more detail and such) you have a really good book there! |
| 2007-04-18 22:51:48 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | excellent story but shitty ending i always hate it when the main character dies kinda ruins the whole thing to me anyway if u make any changes plz make it so that as soon as frank draws he gets hit right in the head so the main character doesnt die maybe just gets wounded |
| 2007-04-19 16:40:54 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Wow. This is one of the best stories I've ever read in my life, it's so awesome! You're a very gifted writer, you should get this published! I could definitely see this being made into a movie one day! I would love to film this, you created you're own utopia up that mountain. I loved your story so much, 100/10. Please keep writing, you're one the best ever. The one thing that left me wondering though, who was the son in the end? It would have made sense if it was Jason, because he was the one responsable for covering Danny, but failed to get a good shot at Frank because Vicky was in the way, but in the end Jason has been kidding his brother about talking things over with Dad. Please let us know who the brother was! Thanks for writing this. One of the best stories ever. Ape |
| 2007-04-20 08:09:02 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | giving you 10 out of 10 is not enough . . . . but giving an infinity out of infinity is something man this is the best series I have read after PARADISE VALLEY this is a really great story my hats of to you there is a lot of things to say but can't find the proper words hope this suffice great work |