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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-09-01 00:59:07 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | man this has to be the best and sadest min storys i have ever read put this in to a book PLEASE turn it in to a book RecSniper (AKA) joey |
| 2007-09-19 18:23:57 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | This happens to be one of the BEST written short stories I have read in a long time. Please fill this out into a novel and get it published. It should be shared... I cried at the end, and not many short stories do that for me.. congrats!!!! |
| 2007-10-01 02:38:21 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | this is the first ever story i had expected to read get some good pleasurable thoughts but ended up wanting to skip the sex scenes jsut to read the story god DAMN this story is worth publishing man send it to an adult publishing house and get this damned thing published keep the title and everything you might want to also elongate the story a bit between chapters if you want to make it better but DAMNIT MAN!!! THIS STORY WAS DAYYYUM GOOD!!!! please write another but no sequel maybe a before story of mebbe sharon and john bc we only got a hint of that story that would be awesome about how the world had ended for them but anyways GOOD WORK AMAIZING JOB!!! |
| 2007-10-09 09:42:40 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Which guy was it at the end? It had to be guy because besides Candace and Vicky there were only guys at Frank's place. I started reading this story after a friend told me about it. You are so well written, maybe a little editing would help in some places but that doesn't really matter. I was so sad when Sharon died and that's nothing compared to how I felt about Danny dying : ( I feel so sorry for Paul, Pam and Karen. Paul because he wanted to be with Sharon and Pam because she wanted to be with Danny and Karen becaus she was so close to him. I haven't read your other stories yet but I can't wait too. Keep writing. Babydoll xoxox... |
| 2007-11-02 15:48:14 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | good story loved all of it keep writing the wee-monster |