| 2008-04-09 19:05:44 |
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ill admit the ending made it good but there are other endings that can make a storie good whyd u have to kill him off |
| 2008-04-12 12:19:26 |
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could someone tell me who was speaking at the end, durinh the Epilogue? ps, wicked story, end made me sad tho, :( |
| 2008-04-13 11:41:46 |
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Great writting, work on the grammatical errors and you could be one pretty good writter. Great ending also, but at the same time very depressing |
| 2008-04-16 22:25:13 |
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gygug |
| 2008-04-20 00:08:01 |
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to the guy who asked why he had to kill him off, he had to because if he didnt the story would continue and continue with no ending. thats not a bad thing but he wanted it to end |