| 2006-08-12 13:36:34 |
Cruel Intentions 2 Pt 1
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The premise of the story is good but the start was very confusing - Is Jade in her last year of high school but you write that she is 21 years old. At 21 she should be in her last year of college. Something doesn't add up. But I look forward to you finishing this story. |
| 2006-08-13 07:24:06 |
Cruel Intentions 2 Pt 1
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Jade was originally meant to be in collage but i changed it to final year of high school. but yeah just think of it as her repeating year 10 a few times. |
| 2006-08-14 15:36:45 |
Cruel Intentions 2 Pt 1
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love this series more much much more please 10/10 |
| 2007-05-05 01:20:06 |
Cruel Intentions 2 Pt 1
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would've been better without the dog |
| 2006-08-11 00:53:36 |
New Experiences_(2)
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great story |