| 2004-07-20 00:00:43 |
A day off from High School
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The worst "erotic" story I EVER read! |
| 2004-07-26 23:14:17 |
A day off from High School
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the guy named dick spelled retarded wrong |
| 2004-07-29 02:19:43 |
A day off from High School
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Pretty good, loved the bit where the main character expected her to join him in the shower. So cliched when it actually happens, love when it doesn't. Makes it a little more realistic, heh... |
| 2004-08-04 16:52:45 |
A day off from High School
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You said you are chinese. How come your name is Kevin Mason? It is so uncool to lie on the internet. |
| 2004-08-29 18:59:21 |
A day off from High School
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uhhh ok, try harder, learn english, or hell, quit your job at mcdonalds and go back to college or something, oh and hillbilly jim, you're probably more dumb than the writer... |