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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-20 20:13:05 | Father-Daughter Love | ***Twstd&Dmntd4Lfe*** bck @ you peeps............ gr8 story.....needs(part2 & part3)at least->part2 = DAUGHTER-MOTHER love{{closeing sequence~>father [&/or]at least one the sisters walks in}}...part3 = you do,tha math(((HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... |
| 2006-09-04 15:31:01 | Father-Daughter Love | Great keep on fucking your daughter could be you will get yourselfs a little bundle of joy |
| 2006-09-11 15:27:23 | Father-Daughter Love | Not that much of as story? |
| 2006-10-25 15:25:49 | Father-Daughter Love | There are a few logisitcal errors, ans some signs of immauture writing. One of the distracting features is the overdramatization useing repition. more that three ! or ahhh, and you get it to look like chilish writing. However I will say it was a nice idea... ;) too bad we can't all be that perverted, |
| 2007-05-08 01:23:41 | Father-Daughter Love | "Now for blow-jobs, the woman should bring her mouth and put it on the mans dick" - NO SHIT SHERLOCK!!! and what is this bullshit about doggiestyle being anal? you're a fuckin moron, try going out and getting ;aid before you write a story, instead of just reading your 7th grade science book! |