| 2007-09-12 01:58:13 |
Daddy, what are you doing? Part 1
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very good 9 cause it was short. |
| 2007-09-28 00:53:03 |
Daddy, what are you doing? Part 1
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lame too young |
| 2007-11-13 12:47:24 |
Daddy, what are you doing? Part 1
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Great story ! Keep the fantasy going- enjoyable ! |
| 2007-12-17 23:47:41 |
Daddy, what are you doing? Part 1
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Good start..great suspense. But the age is very unrealistic. |
| 2006-08-17 20:42:42 |
Susan Elaine
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Good build of tension with the horses and all, but the human sex should have taken more time, and more words. |