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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-21 04:08:14 | And then he kissed me. | The character development was just great. I feel like I know both the main char. without being overstuffed with it. what leads up to a fuck is just as important to this kind of story as words like "cock and pussy" which when used properly are real ball busters. M Amy You write awefully well. You have a deep understanding of your subject, and you know what turns your readers on. Keep it going, write lots more! 10/10 is the only score this one gets, at least it should!! knifedge |
| 2006-08-21 17:24:19 | And then he kissed me. | excellent story 10/10 |
| 2006-08-23 17:39:54 | And then he kissed me. | well written and very real, but needed some more fantasies...!!!! keep writing..!! 8. |
| 2006-08-25 21:08:48 | And then he kissed me. | God Amy. I haven't read such a natural sounding story for years. Are you sure it's not a true account :) Best thing about short stories is when the pages of character development are kept to a minimum. Fabulous. 11/10 without a doubt. Keep them coming you lovely lady. BA |
| 2006-11-07 07:23:18 | And then he kissed me. | THE BEST STORIE EVER 100/10 |