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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-13 07:01:07 | My new friend josh | give it a rest ffs its a sex story its nt gonna be award winnin is it so shut the fuk up |
| 2007-06-28 12:10:58 | My new friend josh | if you people dont like mistakes write your own god danm stories ok then when you do that post them so somebody can leave negative comments abd let you see how it feels this was a good story |
| 2007-12-07 23:59:57 | My new friend josh | The story is good, but the lack of punctuation and grammar errors detracts from its overall effectiveness. Keep writing, but make the stories a little longer. |
| 2007-12-11 20:58:51 | My new friend josh | --If you people dont like mistakes write your own god danm stories ok then when you do that post them so somebody can leave negative comments abd let you see how it feels this was a good story--- i agree,give thema a break, its a sex story. the writer is probably(definitly) horny when writing it,so he might be a bit unfocused on the story as he writes it...nice story mate |
| 2007-12-26 21:51:45 | My new friend josh | I liked the story it was a bit dull but it was a good story and I hope the boy who wrote this would not keep his life a secret you are what u are god made you that way. |