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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-06 08:45:57 | new beginnings ch.1 | Some on here think they are ENGLISH TEACHERS. Of course they do the same thing to every writer. Want to guess who the real dumb asses are? Most writer here write as they are thinking so the grammer, etc. may not be perfect. Teachers Get a job at a school if you must correct every writer. To the writer ignore them. Good Story. But it does belong in fiction I think it does anyway. Just my humble opinion. |
| 2006-10-20 08:15:31 | new beginnings ch.1 | This story ended with Mrs. Clark moving to Ohio... , but you know what intuition through kinetic ensentives is a product of unclothing one with thou eyes; in other words women can't live with them can't live without 'em!!! put them up {guess Who).it'll? |
| 2006-11-26 01:08:41 | new beginnings ch.1 | 8/10 Very nice, but your grammer sucks. Work on that in yotr next story. |
| 2006-12-05 18:43:35 | new beginnings ch.1 | totally no1 will believe this story is true and the grammer of a real 10 years old dude xD but it is a good story indeed |
| 2007-01-10 18:38:11 | new beginnings ch.1 | 9/10 please write some more |