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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-24 14:43:45 | Journey's End | 8/10 -- tighten up the writing and you'd have a winner. Critique your work more closely and don't give away what's going to happen before describing it to the reader! I'd like to read a second chapter, you naughty perverted writer! -- ashley barbie |
| 2006-08-24 15:12:35 | Journey's End | righteous concept. going to chapter two. I agree with AB below that you spoiled what could have been a good mystery, a shocking revelation, however that point is now moot. so... it looks like two-thumbs up -blade- |
| 2006-08-24 15:22:54 | Journey's End-Part 2 | ouch! giving me the creeps, bud. nicely told. -blade- |
| 2006-08-23 10:19:58 | The Artifact | i like the concept of the story. the artifact. You could do so many things with that. Press on. |
| 2006-08-24 19:03:01 | The Artifact | no bestiality |