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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-15 11:33:40 | Vincent and Erin: Halloween Special | I like it, LW...it's nice to see some semblance of romance in these stories. But I'm wondering why you had them going to a costume party and then kind of made all the other people at the party disappear. Maybe you'll find a way to involve them in another sequel. But I like the vivid way you write. Give us some more! |
| 2006-11-18 10:59:00 | Vincent and Erin: Halloween Special | great story-continue on with costume party.9/10 |
| 2007-06-06 19:55:04 | Vincent and Erin: Halloween Special | I liked it very much. Interested to see what happens next..... |
| 2007-11-02 10:25:23 | Vincent and Erin: Halloween Special | I was disapointed in the story-you never bobbed for apples,played the games i'm sure the hosts had planned.NOT!!! great story. great delivery and the mental pictures-WOW-way to go. can't wait to read what happens next. sounds like a baby on the way,huh? or nine months of something else? CAN'T WAIT to read about it. 9/10 thanx |
| 2006-08-28 19:16:24 | 2 times with 2 sisters (revised) | very short, and I think its better with a slower beggining, so its more exiting, but it was ok 5/10 if you made it longer and slowed some parts down itwould have gotten a 8/10 from me, good try though |