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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-07 23:58:46 | High school fuck part 1 | Hey, just some words of advice. The story should have more detail than that and less random talking. And the whole, he said she said, format really distracts you from the story. Try and make it flow a little better and take things slower, teasing and buildup make a story alot better. But not the worst first attempt I've read so don't feel bad. |
| 2006-12-31 12:19:03 | High school fuck part 1 | it was prity gud |
| 2007-03-16 10:45:00 | High school fuck part 1 | DAMN! Give a new writer a break.It was good but could add more detail.ATry again and ignore the critics.They probably don't write! Dr. John |
| 2006-08-30 12:32:06 | the simpsons_(0) | Whoa!!!!!! Great story, it was like watching the cartoon only xxx, that was excellent and i gave you a 10. rudstillhard one |
| 2006-08-30 15:57:53 | the simpsons_(0) | awesome story 10/10 |