| 2006-08-30 11:02:08 |
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Good start,need more detail about you and th the other person. Is it a man or women. I give you a seven |
| 2006-08-30 18:54:26 |
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Same as below. What is the _relationship_ between you and him? 8 of 10 |
| 2006-08-31 00:00:10 |
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great story, i like how u wrote from the hookers point of view. great stuff, a little longer would have been better though 9/10 |
| 2006-09-01 17:07:11 |
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more background would help.good story otherwise |
| 2007-11-04 02:27:32 |
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Very spare writing. Keep writing. 9/10 |