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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-03 04:02:35 | Letter of recommendation_(1) | This good work. It wouldn't take much to make it great. keep at it and enjoy. |
| 2006-09-06 18:19:51 | Letter of recommendation_(1) | only thing is you need to stick with the name kevin or keith |
| 2006-09-07 17:12:17 | Letter of recommendation_(1) | Not a fan. sorry dude. It needs more details and foreplay. |
| 2006-09-09 01:54:52 | Letter of recommendation_(1) | Pretty good for your virgin effort (no pun intended). Some things to fix: -punctuation -na... consistancy -what exactly did the mom break? -more details, both personal and sexual -more frequent paragraph breaks. 7/10. Good job. |
| 2006-11-23 13:34:53 | Letter of recommendation_(1) | Not too bad.... |