| 2007-01-19 05:28:39 |
My Darling Amma and Sister _ Part 1
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I was very confused with many events, I am sure you fully understand your meanings, but its hard for people not in your train of thought to get it. I sudgest and editor or a just going over it 1 of 2 times a few days after you write it. You might try searching the forums for an editing partner. |
| 2007-01-20 11:52:43 |
My Darling Amma and Sister _ Part 1
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Sorry...I had my toy out and couldn't get off...try again |
| 2007-07-09 16:22:17 |
My Darling Amma and Sister _ Part 1
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LAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... 0/10 where the fuck is the blackmail dumb fuck |
| 2006-10-22 14:29:09 |
Keeping Karla
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nice story makes me wish I had neighbors keep them cummming |
| 2006-10-23 10:48:26 |
Keeping Karla
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great |