| 2006-09-18 14:07:10 |
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True it's written by a male (now 68). But it is indeed a true story. I write my stories mostly in first person, third person (omniscient) and sometimes from Dot's point of view. I call it "dictation-fellatio." I admit to "reconstructing" some of the dialogue. But you will understand that within our little swing groups, our parties were a common subject of conversation. Dot, especially, filled me in on a lot. I'm not an accomplished writer by any means, just enjoy remembering, writing, and jerking off. You enjoy too. |
| 2006-09-18 15:16:58 |
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Also, I don't write or like to read stories written in the second person. I.e., "I take suck you tit...." or you wrap your legs around...." I find that style annoying for some reason. |
| 2006-12-09 21:30:52 |
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There ought to have been a foursome and some male dick sucking thrown in for alittle spice. loved the story, hope to read more in the future. |
| 2007-08-27 13:54:12 |
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Terrific story! Iloved the part about Brooke, the sexy little cunt. Hardon that wont quit!!! |
| 2006-09-02 07:21:22 |
A Horny Night in Stars Hollow - Chapter 3
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nice use of the characters from gilmore girls.... |