| 2006-09-02 20:17:44 |
my college slave 1
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good work but dont write in text short form it rounse the story 8 |
| 2006-09-02 22:04:06 |
my college slave 1
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And what would the hardcore part be? hardcore sex is the slang term for sexual intercourse |
| 2006-09-02 23:21:50 |
my college slave 1
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Too short, but good. Need to make it longer with more detail. good start |
| 2006-09-06 11:38:30 |
my college slave 1
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Don't tell him off for the way he spells things, if you don't spell right yourself. It does ruin it though, you are right. |
| 2006-10-06 10:13:42 |
my college slave 1
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excellent |