| 2007-07-05 09:10:05 |
The Runaway Club- Chapter 2
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Utter crap.I can hardly believe the same person might have written this with all the lousy spelling, bad grammar and all the shit underlining, after having written chapter one which was pretty damn good. |
| 2007-08-26 14:55:53 |
The Runaway Club- Chapter 2
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unreadable very bad |
| 2007-09-14 15:02:17 |
The Runaway Club- Chapter 2
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underline: ys im a dick hu loves underlining hu knt sp3l |
| 2007-12-11 17:40:30 |
The Runaway Club- Chapter 2
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wth l2spell jesus christ..... other than that it was good, except for the underlining..... |
| 2006-09-10 11:41:47 |
Quickie Mart Quickie
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You need to write in second or third person a little more plot would not hurt any I would also brake things up make it easier for others to read |