| 2006-09-11 11:45:23 |
Waiting for Him to Come Home
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Is this just one l o n g sentence, it seems though it takes a long time to read, but what's the point it's drivel. |
| 2006-09-11 14:00:06 |
Waiting for Him to Come Home
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good one real passion. Keep writing. Waiting for part two. |
| 2006-09-11 23:55:42 |
Waiting for Him to Come Home
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Good Story!!! Keep it up. |
| 2006-09-13 00:12:33 |
Waiting for Him to Come Home
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Paragraphs would help. |
| 2006-09-15 05:52:46 |
Waiting for Him to Come Home
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Please include paragraphs, the way you write makes it difficult to read and wank at the same time! |