| 2006-12-19 11:05:35 |
The Days After My Wedding 4
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You need to learn how to use paragraphs, your story if unreadable. |
| 2007-01-18 22:34:56 |
The Days After My Wedding 4
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Great story. Very interested. Little disappointed about the ending, but well explained, and un-expected, with the events within. Please keep up this wonderful work. Overall I would say this tory is an8>5 or 9 as i only vote at the end I am greatly pleased with the whole story. |
| 2007-02-16 12:19:36 |
The Days After My Wedding 4
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poorly written, unbelievably unrealistic and disgusting |
| 2007-02-19 21:10:49 |
The Days After My Wedding 4
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This shit is weak and probably bullshit. Why didn't you finish it up with all four of you licking each others cunts and assholes? Lisa should have been made to pay for her misdeed by being forced to suck your hubbys cumload out of your gaping asshole. This is fucked up and NOT nasty enough |
| 2007-02-28 16:32:15 |
The Days After My Wedding 4
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a pretty good story...after all it is fiction...I liked it. Fuck these other fuckers who don't appreciate fiction! |