| 2006-09-13 06:31:33 |
Babysitter_(1)
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when is part two going to get here |
| 2006-09-13 21:47:18 |
Babysitter_(1)
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learn to write...the grammer is bad even for this site. its almost impossible to tell whos talking because you're to stupid to use quotation marks. |
| 2006-09-16 17:09:44 |
Babysitter_(1)
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You people in the comments are retarded. For your information, it's "grammar" not "grammer". If you're going to insult someone, at least spell correctly because otherwise you're making yourself look like an idiot. |
| 2006-10-01 17:59:55 |
Babysitter_(1)
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not good. to be honest found it quite sick. I read prego club didn't find it sick. Probably somehing to do with the style. This one seemed to be exploitative...As I said maybe it was just the writing style for this story |
| 2006-11-17 15:04:13 |
Babysitter_(1)
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i couldnt even get past the first few paragraphs. i read some perverted stuff, but this is way beyond my taste.i dont like how you wrote it, and learn some grammar and composition. |