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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-13 13:26:42 | The Ranch_(1) | Needs proof reading, some typing errors or wrong usage of words.. Very good story line ... waiting for the next chapter.. Don... |
| 2006-09-13 21:03:57 | The Ranch_(1) | Please THE NEXT CHAPTER |
| 2006-09-14 03:56:26 | The Ranch_(1) | u sick fuck a 25 yr old w ith a 14 im reporting u 2 the police |
| 2006-09-14 04:28:51 | The Ranch_(1) | its a bit annoying to read without parograph spaces but good |
| 2006-09-14 04:36:19 | The Ranch_(1) | lol i would hope that everyone realises the diffrence bettween wanting to and imagining commiting a crime and actaully commiting it in a reality where all the negative side effects that make it illegal actaully happen. Um as for the story, the spacing was hard , because i read alot and so i ve learned to read from the begining of paragraphs. the story itself was ok. |