| 2007-01-12 16:51:17 |
My Cousin Laura's 18th birthday
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That was a very well told story- and very hot too! To me there's not much hotter than a good cousin-fucking story- the taboo is there and makes it hot but you're not so closely related as to make it pure "Yuck." You are a great writer, keep it up! |
| 2007-01-19 17:09:43 |
My Cousin Laura's 18th birthday
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10 / 10i what to that my cousin jenny coz she is sexy i will do it when i can fucking good one mate |
| 2007-01-22 23:28:36 |
My Cousin Laura's 18th birthday
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iOD |
| 2007-01-25 22:00:53 |
My Cousin Laura's 18th birthday
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I read it for a second time and it was just as good as the first. Enough sex, but not too much. Personally, I'd rather you made a much longer story and separated it into chapters, (perhaps the whole summer?). Anyway, very well edited, I don't know abou the UK, but here it's "cum". You have an incredibe amount of talent look forward to feading more in the future! |
| 2007-01-25 22:28:19 |
My Cousin Laura's 18th birthday
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P.S. just read the UK spelling notice, my bad. second you're a chick!!?? That makes it all the more amazing! |