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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-10 10:22:03 | Bouncin' Becky | Leave the ( I ) out of your work "First Person". I think you should try to write more in second and third person. Try it you will be very surprised how much easier it is going to make the story flow. Play more with your adverbs. There is a wonderful book it is called a Thesaurus. LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING MORE WORK FROM YOU "GOOD START"!! Do not be scaried to go over the top in your writings, when, one is on the cuting edge of any thing in life, it is either the best or worest sittuation. Just know it is the best and it will be...!!!!!!!!!!!! 10/10 did make me horny as shit I got of on reading one half then once again later when I finished reading "Bouncin' becky by Melissa" If you would like to chat with me some time drop me a line at the p_lover77 at yellowman dot com. |
| 2006-10-10 20:30:27 | Bouncin' Becky | how could you stop that story??????????? Please write more. NOW!!!! |
| 2006-10-11 00:08:20 | Bouncin' Becky | I too, am a woman. Or...am I....a man?! I read all of the words! |
| 2006-10-11 11:22:53 | Bouncin' Becky | bum ur mun |
| 2006-10-11 14:25:25 | Bouncin' Becky | Would you like to fuck your grandpa? I would love to fuck your teenage cunt. -- 76 year old man |