| 2006-10-17 23:29:11 |
Annie's Rape
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Pretty good shit, the only problem I had is when you are talking through "Annie's" point of view but attempting to make it through the rapist's point of view. It's like it's someone else saying the things that Annie is feeling and it doesn't make sense in the first place that the rapist would really know how Annie is feeling... If you see what I mean. But good nonetheless 7/10 |
| 2006-11-24 15:19:44 |
Annie's Rape
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love the mean, dirty talk.. it made my pussy wet right away! also, you need to make the paragraphs shorter so i can finger fuck myself between the naughty shit the rapist is doing to the oh-so-derserving slut! |
| 2007-01-11 18:22:39 |
Annie's Rape
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story got good, until the end where he's calling for help as I would call it. |
| 2007-06-23 01:37:27 |
Annie's Rape
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consistant. |
| 2007-07-20 00:05:05 |
Annie's Rape
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wat the duce check out my stories 7.3 inchs |