| 2006-12-31 17:23:42 |
harry potter and the snake eyes
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You really should learn to spell before you continue this story. The premis is good, but it's very difficult reading. |
| 2007-01-01 02:18:21 |
harry potter and the snake eyes
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jeez-didn't you re-read what you typed at all?my dog could type better and make less mistakes.good story premice though-TRY AGAIN. for dismal spelling=3/10 |
| 2007-01-01 03:14:51 |
harry potter and the snake eyes
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I liked the story, good job! just try to work on the spelling... 10/10 |
| 2007-01-01 03:45:14 |
harry potter and the snake eyes
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I couldn't bear to read it due to the attrocious spelling, I know 3rd graders who can do better. |
| 2007-01-01 16:56:24 |
harry potter and the snake eyes
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terrible spelling, i tried to read it and couldn't finnish |