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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-19 15:33:28 | A surprize for brother | A deliciously sexy, erotic, lusty story. Well done (even if you misspelled "receiving" several times. It's "e" before the "i.") The Dick Slapper gives the story a hearty 10/10. |
| 2006-10-19 17:43:00 | A surprize for brother | you could make it happen less quickly and describe it more. otherwise, was alright. 6/10 |
| 2006-10-19 21:28:03 | A surprize for brother | this story needs some major editing, more describing, and a better plot. Seems like you just wrote somethihng really quick and submitted it without going over and seeing what needed changing.. 3/10 |
| 2006-10-20 18:05:07 | A surprize for brother | barn owl |
| 2006-10-21 00:46:17 | A surprize for brother | fucking bullshit |