| 2007-02-28 13:29:23 |
The Mysterious Lana (Ch 8)
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Were is the next part ? 10/10 |
| 2007-03-25 21:49:47 |
The Mysterious Lana (Ch 8)
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please dude i check to see if you write the new one like once a week. these are such good stories. PLZ finish the story. 10/10 |
| 2006-10-03 12:39:06 |
Felicia the babysitter 2
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great story any more on felicia |
| 2006-10-03 12:42:41 |
Felicia the babysitter 2
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not bad. Decent prose style. Punctuation awful, but fuck it! Good flow to story. A tad unrealistic but quite arousing none-the-less |
| 2006-10-03 14:41:15 |
Felicia the babysitter 2
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omg, this sucked, I didn't even read it. I was trying to make some sense of the dialogue and decided to just go to the bottom and say WTF?! Use speech marks or sumthing. |