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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-10 01:38:49 | Snow Storm Flight Delay | Your sister is a whore...more desciptions. Part 2 should be u fucking ur three headed kid u guys r gunna have |
| 2007-01-10 09:13:44 | Snow Storm Flight Delay | Nice start! I want more, please. |
| 2007-01-10 13:51:36 | Snow Storm Flight Delay | Very average. Obviously, your sister is a slut, but we still need to know why she suddenly decided to jump your bones in a hotel bathroom with mom on the other side of the door. Does your sister know something about mom's sexual habits that we, the readers, don't? The description and action were decent, but there was not nearly enough lead-in. Hopefully you can put a little more work into future stories and produce something really excellent. =dreamer= |
| 2007-01-10 14:23:16 | Snow Storm Flight Delay | alll riiggghhhttt |
| 2007-01-10 17:45:33 | Snow Storm Flight Delay | The story line was absolutely amazing, but the story lacked grammar, and structure. I think that with a little bit of revision, and maybe some added fictional details, this story would be one of the best I've read in sometime. I'm not saying it was bad, thats just some advice. 9/10 |