| 2007-02-12 21:43:07 |
School Daze chapter 3
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oh stop with the whole god thing, it's about the story, not about greek mythology! i love d this story, sweet and innocent yet also unadulterated and sexy. keep writing |
| 2006-10-16 06:11:54 |
Summer Love_(2)
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The ending wasn't right. Paul didn't walk over to her. It was Steve. Not only that, your english and spelling could be better. "He breed ....." no, it should be "he bred ...." This could have been one heck of a fine, sexy tale. |
| 2006-10-16 19:04:05 |
Summer Love_(2)
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Hmmm these ones that leave negative comments always seem to hide behind the "Reader" anon, wonder why! |
| 2006-10-17 12:19:18 |
Summer Love_(2)
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Just nneds to be cleaned up, they went from applying sun tan lotion to being in the shower? Good story though, we knew she was a slut before we even started to read this.Are they married or dating? |
| 2007-01-27 17:43:48 |
Summer Love_(2)
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I GIVE YOU A 3/10 |