| 2006-10-16 16:21:04 |
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Great story Igave it a 10 How abput one from south america |
| 2006-10-16 19:15:21 |
The Sales Trip II
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Great story but HEARD! |
| 2006-10-17 02:18:21 |
The Sales Trip II
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really liked it. it held my attention to the very end. |
| 2006-10-17 05:49:23 |
The Sales Trip II
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Hey, Mr. author, the word "herd" should be spelled "heard" in your story, and "finely" should have been spelled "finally." Bad spelling ruins what could be a fine sexy tale. And please don't listen to the morons who will tell you that spelling doesn't matter as long as the story is "hot." They're uneducated morons who feel better if someone is as ignorant as they are. |
| 2006-10-17 12:12:30 |
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Outstanding story, Although there were some spelling error I found it OK to read. I hope when you write about South America you will add more young girl to the story because they are hot to trot |