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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-18 04:53:58 | Brittney's secret lust 2 | loved both of em, keep going |
| 2006-10-18 05:47:37 | Brittney's secret lust 2 | Hey, Eternalcold, you need to learn how to spell. Seriously, your story was fine, but the constant fuck-ups with your english are distracting. I mean, the very least you could do is learn how to spell "masturbate." I'm the dick slapper and I can't abide poor grammar. |
| 2006-10-18 06:24:10 | Brittney's secret lust 2 | needs more |
| 2006-10-18 06:28:06 | Brittney's secret lust 2 | story was awesome, you should def. make number three. And to the reader that posted on 10-18-06, who gives a shit if he had ONE fucking typo out of the entire story, go back to jacking off, and stop critiquing others stories. I don't think you should even have room to talk about the story, badly, seeing as you've not even wrote one yourself. And obviously, the story was good enough to get you off, and didn't distract you all that much seeing as you read until the end of it. |
| 2006-10-18 22:42:07 | Brittney's secret lust 2 | Thanks for the comments already people. And listen... to those who criticize my spelling. Like i said i know it isnt perfect. Were you the ones who came first in the spelling bee? Im more worried about my sentence structure and how to get a good point across for the story. I dont have MS word, and i dont plan to get it. I spell to the best of my ability. and i thank everyone who reads and posts a comment. good or bad. |