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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-12-28 23:12:58 | Now a Family Affair | like you said,grammer and structure mean little to you.fair story anyway.8/10 |
| 2006-12-29 15:56:51 | Now a Family Affair | Terrible narrative style. It could have been much better if you had written in the third person style. But that's my opinion; others may feel different about it. I just couldn't get into this story because of your grammar and narrative. 5/10 |
| 2006-12-29 23:23:37 | Now a Family Affair | Good story but the style did lose me at times 8/10 |
| 2006-12-30 11:32:11 | Now a Family Affair | I suggest if you read anymore of this series you try to put yourself in Keri's mind if you are female and mine it you are male. After writing 10 parts in this style I hope you realize that I am not going to change. Thanks |
| 2006-12-31 01:19:08 | Now a Family Affair | anyone giving this more than a 5 must be a sadest. |