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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-12-28 10:46:53 | Magic Wands, so to speak part IV | You shouldn't write about Harry Potter and his friends that way. |
| 2006-12-28 11:41:22 | Magic Wands, so to speak part IV | Just adjust your paragraph's to 4-5 sentences long and you will be one good damn writer the only problem was with the paragraphs. Because it made it harder to read. But over all you have a good future as a writer. Good Luck my man p.s. I rate this story 9/10 maybe you should give Dean a spell to make his dick bigger than ever that would be a good twist to the story. |
| 2006-12-28 15:54:42 | Magic Wands, so to speak part IV | another great chapter.gonna write more?would be nice.8/10 for paragraphs and mispellings |
| 2006-12-28 17:22:52 | Magic Wands, so to speak part IV | Hmmm the first one was better in my mine i gave that 10/10 this one about 8 I find people cheating on people kind anoyin.(happend to me). Ya also make the paragraphs shorter because your should make a new paragraph after every person talks. |
| 2006-12-30 01:38:40 | Magic Wands, so to speak part IV | Need to fix your spelling, but good story |