| 2006-12-28 09:52:47 |
Desiree
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When I started, I thought it had good potential. However, when I got to the shoe thing, I started to realize how laim this story was. I kept reading and it just seam to get worse. |
| 2006-12-29 02:00:07 |
Desiree
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Bag of shite, please stop before you offend people who are good at this stuff. |
| 2007-05-26 14:52:56 |
Desiree
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the guy is 13 |
| 2006-10-22 06:48:59 |
Cock Hungry Sister-In-Law 3
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Easy to read, only objection is that it was too predictable, nothing unexpected or fresh.. |
| 2006-10-22 07:52:02 |
Cock Hungry Sister-In-Law 3
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Don't play games let the readers do the rating |