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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-12-25 18:40:58 | Auntie's amorous animal teaches the twins | It was pretty good, but I hated how you had stupid names for everything like "root" |
| 2006-12-26 10:09:06 | Auntie's amorous animal teaches the twins | Hey that was great. I'm a guy aged 51, I cum like a fucking fountain. You are one great fucking story teller. 10/10 |
| 2006-12-27 06:35:35 | Auntie's amorous animal teaches the twins | first time here... first story i read... amazing happy holidays everyone :) And yes jacob needed more pleasure! |
| 2006-12-27 21:08:45 | Auntie's amorous animal teaches the twins | A decent story, but you tend to describe the same things over and over, make a little plot advancement, and then the same thing over and over again. A great concept but rather repetative. 6 / 10 |
| 2006-12-28 07:14:05 | Auntie's amorous animal teaches the twins | I must admit this is some really good work... but a point of constructive criticism: While it's good to use a lot adjectives to clearly describe what your trying to get across, using too many of them can force your writing to become repetitive and thus a little dull. It did seem like you were using alot of the same words over and over again, and the easiest way to overcome that is by making the story shorter. Break it up into four or five parts and you'll be set. |