| 2006-12-18 14:13:50 |
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(note: this is known as continuity, its a good technique for stories that you other authors might want to pay attention to) you got no room to give advice to other authors about continutity because your story is random and is pretty much devoid of sex lol wow horrible |
| 2006-12-18 15:54:29 |
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rofl, you're my fave author on here. All you people dissing his stuff, check out his other stories. All SOOOO funny! |
| 2006-12-18 17:21:27 |
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haha fuckin hilarious |
| 2006-12-18 19:11:20 |
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to everyone rating my story badly, maybe you didnt notice where i said his face got red as a fire hydrant? thats called a simile, its actually commonplace in canon literature which you'd know if you were as well read as i am. |
| 2006-12-19 08:08:58 |
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gay |