| 2004-08-02 05:55:19 |
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Well, i gotta say a few things. First, this is the most descriptive fiction story i have ever read. Second, the storyline feeld like it was plotted by some hollywood genius. Third, I know a lot of people had said this already, but the plot would make a great movie even without the sex. I am sure that you will have a bright career ahead of you in the erotica category. You could even sell this script and it would make a hell a lot of money. Probaly one of the best stories there are out there today, since nowadays all people do is start the story with "He took off all her clothes and fucked her silly". This story had an excellent plot leading up to AND finishing it up. You should be very proud of this story. I even photo copyed this story and passed it around my office. Thanks a whole bunch = |
| 2004-08-03 23:52:39 |
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this was a wonderful story, i am glad i read it. |
| 2004-08-04 00:30:53 |
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Good Read. Keep it up... the writing that is. That will keep the other up. |
| 2004-08-10 09:47:28 |
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crap your story turned me off! its great keep it up |
| 2004-08-18 21:37:38 |
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Well done! an excellent sense of humor to go along with marvelous knowledge of the art of sex. Who did tell Frank? |