| 2005-01-09 02:55:32 |
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Grand story i think you could mabye (mabye) publish a book if you try harder to spell things correct and learn how to make it a little more realistic but overall 9/10. |
| 2005-01-11 12:43:30 |
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Great story!!! Witty , light and incredibly sexy!!!! Do keep the good work going !!! Hope to read some more of ur stories |
| 2005-01-11 23:07:34 |
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Great story and too well written for typical xnxx. which stands to reason since it wasn't. Miss behavin, if that's her name, probably isn't reading these comments and may not even know xnxx copied her story from some other location. a lot of the stories from around march 2003 were simply copied from elsewhere probably to get the site started. |
| 2005-04-12 03:01:48 |
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i thought this story was fantastic. hope to read more of them soon. |
| 2005-04-16 02:56:24 |
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This story is good. i hope tha yo continue with this story. i really want to know what happened to meliss and Chris after the wedding and etc. |