| 2006-12-01 09:50:17 |
MY LITTEL HITCHHIKER 8 & 9
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very nice and exciting story, keep the work up. The sidestory is great and it's not only about ganging that lil girl. I like it very much and really hoping for more!!! |
| 2008-02-11 23:51:00 |
MY LITTEL HITCHHIKER 8 & 9
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i like the remark about how english are supposed to drinlk tea that brought humor to it, which is rare in erotic storis. |
| 2006-12-02 07:27:00 |
A Whisky & Lemonade
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very nice story ,almost perfect but i thought i should've had more naughty words . some parts had me confused like " Gayle closed her eyes, remembering the way she saw him in the garage a few weeks ago" it didnt mention that a few weeks had pass right after the incident but other then that i loved it and for a idea for pt. 2 ( that i hope you write) ethan becomes more confident with his cock and tries not to hide it so much and ends up not intentionly seducing his mother and sister. well it's jsut idea i hope you think i about it . love your work ! |
| 2006-12-02 12:29:09 |
A Whisky & Lemonade
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What kind of 19 year old doesnt know what a fucking pussy is |
| 2006-12-02 23:09:07 |
A Whisky & Lemonade
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a 19 year old virgin is one thing but this kid knows absolutely nothing about sex and apparently has never even masturbated before! are you sure he wasn't supposed to be 12? |