| 2004-08-07 05:28:00 |
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The BESTdamn story I've ever read S.P. . Hope to see more of your fine writing ! |
| 2004-08-08 19:52:46 |
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,,,darn good...personally I did want to see the brother and sister go at it, as well as a great threesome....Oh, well..... |
| 2004-08-15 09:23:10 |
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I dont post too often, only when an exceptional story comes up, and this one is great! I like how you made it a story, not just a lot of sex, and how the story all fit in together with a plot of romance, not just meaningless sex. The sex parts were arousing, and the non-sex parts were emotional. Very good story. Maybe you should write a romance novel with these charactors, using this as the last chapter. |
| 2004-08-23 17:59:42 |
TRISHA AND JENNIFER part 2
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o wonderful story not mindless sex and stage love with porn stars, but with real people. very real, a romance story of teens swept up by emotions and lost in the depths of reality. i will be looking for a book in stores, seriously keep writing we all enjoy it |
| 2004-08-29 17:04:13 |
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pure class, keep it up |