| 2006-11-01 17:36:20 |
Sister, Brother, Summer Lover
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Terrific story; good writing; good grammar; plenty of erotic, sensuous content. The dick slapper enjoyed it totally. 10/10 |
| 2006-11-01 21:43:37 |
Sister, Brother, Summer Lover
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the best erotic story i have read on this site, made all the better because as an australian i know just what you were writing about with your social environmental descriptions..! |
| 2006-11-01 22:43:34 |
Sister, Brother, Summer Lover
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great story, one of the best on here 10/10 |
| 2006-11-02 00:00:41 |
Sister, Brother, Summer Lover
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I hope theres a part 2 and he fucks her ass |
| 2006-11-02 03:12:08 |
Sister, Brother, Summer Lover
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Great. Real people again. A good read |