| 2007-03-19 04:57:03 |
Pope Joan 2
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I just wrote a comment about MM xii telling you the reasons I love the series. I said I would make a suggestion later. This comment is about that as well as this story. Both stories are beautiful. I agree with reader 11-03-06. I have been an editor for a lifetime and can't create as you do so easily. Still, if I were you, I would find a friend who possesses a really strong vocabulary in English and a talent for English grammar. You have no additonal need for creative writing, but to publish you will need support. I truly don't mean to disparage what you do, it is beautiful, but you use A LOT of words that sound alike but are incorrect for your application. I will write another note at MM xii with examples but only for encouragement. Few, and certainly not I, have your talent, |