| 2006-11-24 02:48:10 |
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cool... but 2 fucking long...!!!!! what a hell is wrong with you guys.? |
| 2006-11-25 06:17:21 |
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very well written, thats one lucky mofo. story is too long though, besides that : Perfect! |
| 2006-11-29 00:56:26 |
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Great story a little long but the the story line made up for it. |
| 2006-12-05 15:28:00 |
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absoloutly great, great plot, bit too long as every1 said and repetative but really well written |
| 2006-12-07 11:00:36 |
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that was the best story on the site that i've read by a long shot |