| 2006-11-09 05:10:57 |
Seducing the secretary
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I thought the story was very, very mediocre. I can't believe anybody would think of this piece as being a "great sexy story." Give me a break. The Dick Slapper gives this a 4/10. |
| 2006-11-09 10:16:32 |
Seducing the secretary
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I thought the story was great. Sounds like something I did many years ago, but I maried her. |
| 2007-03-03 04:07:31 |
Seducing the secretary
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Mostly good construction. Mostly good grammar. Outstanding story line for so short a story. Hated the end because I like Disney world conclusions with everyone living happily ever after. I am an older hetero man and still like happy endings. |
| 2006-11-07 10:44:47 |
Travelling with my younger sister
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You should have had her suck your dick while you eat her pussy; after all why bring it up if it was not to be????? |
| 2006-11-07 11:28:41 |
Travelling with my younger sister
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Not a bad story. There has to be another, mabye have a threesome with her friends. |