| 2007-01-17 14:38:13 |
Mom discovers son
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more more more |
| 2007-01-19 05:23:03 |
Mom discovers son
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that was awesome and well done.. I am glad everyone doesn't always go for the same money shot moves that a repeated over and over in most stories. be my mommy again.. I crave more of your work! |
| 2007-01-21 22:16:20 |
Mom discovers son
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very good story, but split it up into paragraphs, it's a bit hard to read |
| 2007-02-03 23:46:35 |
Mom discovers son
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Story pretty good spelling awful. |
| 2007-03-07 18:54:42 |
Mom discovers son
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Too many "for one reason or another" situations at the start. Not bad tho'. |