| 2007-01-16 23:54:35 |
Ecstatic dreams come true
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Very hot. Technically the writing isn't very good, but if you can get things to flow a little better without losing the emotions and spontaneity you'll really have something. A solid 8. |
| 2008-04-13 10:30:23 |
Ecstatic dreams come true
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that was awsome. please make a part 3 with a little more romance. |
| 2007-01-14 12:23:06 |
The Maid in me
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a little planing on the next story and it will be pretty good i think softstrokernh |
| 2007-02-08 18:57:32 |
The Maid in me
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OK but I don't like rape or violence. I like crossdressing but there wasn't a lot of that. |
| 2007-03-05 17:15:17 |
The Maid in me
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OH Well |