| 2007-01-16 14:40:53 |
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I thought it was great, but I have a passion for older women. I was 18 when I lost my virginity to a 46 year old woman. Within the next year I had it with a 42 year old and a 48 year old. One thing about then, they dont tell, they dont swell and they are grateful as hell. |
| 2007-01-16 15:24:15 |
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odd. |
| 2007-01-16 22:44:10 |
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very well written just an odd plot line although overall not bad, good work just try a different subject next time lol |
| 2007-01-17 01:26:03 |
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In Part 2 we want to see the stepbrother getting set up in some way that exposes him as the asshole that "cmptrbr" was talking about, without possible harm to the others. There are sick people who will take advantage, but the main character was, as far as he could, complying with her wishes. |
| 2007-01-17 03:55:53 |
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not my kind of story but good imaginationlet the bad guy get hit by a truck that throws him onto a train track where his leg get cut off then as he crawl to safety a pack of wild dog find him and eat him alive the friggin rapist |